Revealers, Amanda Marrone

ehh--this was okay. i just sort of expected it to be super angsty like her first, and this was just.. different, actually, from what i expected. it wasn't in a bad way. but throughout most of the book i just ended up being confused about what was really going on, which was the point, right, because she was too? i'm just saying it could probably be set up in a better way so that i related to her more, but that might be asking for too much especially when i personally have no idea how i might've gone about doing that.

anyway, i'll just cut it short then. the twist at the end was weird, and i wasn't sure how to feel about it. i personally thought her and finn should go together, for whatever reason--i think the scene where he interacts with our protagonist made a huge imprint in my mind. plus i actually thought their dialogue was really cute, and prefer him much more than uhh.. the dude she ends up with at the end, since his character actually comes out more. the "twist" wasn't much of a twist at the end, but.. eh, this is the anal bitch talking. i guess my personal assessment is that it's decent, but could've been better. the language didn't sound convincing at times, with an almost forced feel to it. well, and.. seriously, i need to be hired on as copyeditor. i could've easily searched out errors every 5 pages or so. and they weren't even really big ones, often just the subject-verb agreement stuff, but it really does jar the reading experience when i do notice them (which wasn't actually as frequent as i make it sound, but still.)

i wonder what i'll read next then..